Slight improvement of the memory model man page

1 files changed, 3 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/doc/memory.9.txt b/doc/memory.9.txt
index 9a18355c..67b8afa6 100644
--- a/doc/memory.9.txt
+++ b/doc/memory.9.txt
@@ -99,10 +99,9 @@ apply to standard integer types.
 There are no special provisions for initialization. Initializing a
 variable must simply happen before any other access to that variable.
 For example, this may be achieved with a release-write to the variable,
-or with a regular write before an operation that synchronizes with
-another operation that precedes regular accesses to the variable.
-This makes the interface surface of the atomic module much more compact
-than the standard one.
+or with a regular write that preceding a release sequence. This makes
+the interface surface of the atomic module much more compact than
+the standard one.
 
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